Let us dance on the stars
treading softly the milky way...
See the moon longing
for years to witness the rainbow
of our feelings.....
So come my love.....
Let us be flowers of a night
skimming softly the heaving waves...
See the wild wind whispering
silently the saga
of our timeless breathing...
So come my love.....
Let us meet under the tree
living through ages...
See the birds on its branches perching
humming the story
of our heartbeats racing
So come my love....
Let us be clouds of a thunderous night
panting with passion unknown...
See the angels waiting
for the songs of raindrops
tinted with our cravings....
So come my love....
rashmi.
12 comments:
Aw!! Chhoo cute poem.:D
Its seriously damn sweet.:))
And the pictures are lovely and dayyeemmnn CUTE.=D
thanx ayushree and nalini.
@nalini..we do cherish and savour beautiful moments-don't we?thanx once again for appreciating my work.
hey beautiful,
ur poetry is picturesque and i especially loved so many prhrases for eg."rainbow of our feelings...winds whispering...humming the story..."
quite a composer aren't u and so understandable which is the best part.Way to go girl!!
aww...shuch a chweet poem...n luv d piks too....diksha
Really enticing call.
Good going!
aww shooo sweet
really cute pics
n even cuter poem
aish
Its a masterpiece, almost Keatsian in its beauty and power. It opens softly with pangs of eternal longing, continues wistfully through windswept nights,ends with swirling passion waiting only to be requited by the music of raindrops.
Keep enriching us.
Excellent poem, really your skills at poetry are top class and your blog is a really nice place to visit.
thanx
diksha and shivani for constantly glowing around me!
@shivani-we found each other, after class 6 or 7 i guess and hv so much in common:)keep shining!
@zave-thanx 4 callin the "call" enticing!!!
@U.S.-truly u r a gr8 follower-respect ur expressions-what a poetic way to "praise"..
@mr."the analyist"keep visiting...nd yes thanx once again 4 finding my blog nd posting ur precious cmnt!
Hey rashmi- good going-your poetry is so enriching and beautiful--keep writing more
that was so lovely! great work!
how to come with my steely hands and rocky shoulder..
oh.. beautiful flower..
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