Thursday, March 25, 2010

THIS SILENT SOUL


Languishing, perishing,perpetuating
on avowed path
This silent soul

Surreptitiously bearing brunt   
" misdeeds "of time
This silent soul

Scathing ,lacerating,piercing
its humble heart
This silent soul.....

Agreeing, covenanting,compromising
to a "bond unknown"
This silent soul.......

rashmi.

5 comments:

Nalini Hebbar said...

the refrain give a great feel to the poem!

shivani said...

And soul also finds it's mate in all that silence.Trust me on this and definitely as Nalini says this lyrical one is made more impressive because of the refrains.Envy you and others who can churn out music out of sadness.

shivu3075 said...

excellent poem on different shades of life..

keep it up and keep moving

rashmi singh said...

thanx
@nalini forever going thru my work nd appreciating.

@shivani-for undrestanding my "soul"

@shivu-for going thru my creations and "covenanting" with them.....

Rajat said...

Why is this soul so silent?

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